Date: 01/03/14 11:27 am Title: Peach Me, I Must Be Dreaming
You know, you should not write about food anymore. But now I kinda understand why you like food so much. Haha. How is one supposed to eat this fruit without the distraction of your story? No, really, you should start writing again. I love to read your stories. With love. x
Date: 12/05/13 10:56 pm Title: Spaghetti Western
Jackson Pollock, great. Any one from a family of teen agers will identify with this although our boys obviously did not have to face outraged parents. The brothers attacking each other only to stand as one is also well understood. I smiled while reading it not only because it was visually friendly but because I once had been there myself.
Date: 12/05/13 10:43 pm Title: Peach Me, I Must Be Dreaming
very descriptive but not overly so. The homage to the playfulness of the boys is right on the mark.
Date: 09/11/13 03:24 pm Title: Spaghetti Western
Aha, I don't really like Spaghetti but I'd like to eat it like that once. We should do that. And I can see them doing this. I mean, there's like the pizza thing in World behind my wall. They would really do something like this, children. It made me smile. And hungry.
Author's Response: Oh my, I forgot about that pizza fight, haha. Spaghetti is yummy! Even if you don't like it I'm glad reading about it made you hungry; food is good. And thank you for your review! :-)
Date: 05/01/12 12:20 am Title: Spaghetti Western
LOL! I can just see this happening :) Nice!
Date: 12/08/11 10:21 pm Title: Spaghetti Western
I liked the length and the whimsical situation. I'll bet Jutta never made spaghetti again, after seeing it all over the boys and the walls. I adored Bill's role as the leader of the dissented party. He was their voice. He was their representative. He fought for their rights till the end, when the spaghetti fight began. Highly entertaining read! Thanks for writing it!
Author's Response: Hey, I'm sorry for the delayed response (I blame my mailbox for letting things get lost)... Jutta probably never did, and it would have been a twist of irony if the boys decided after than pasta *wasn't* so bad - it *is* the twin's favourite food. I'm so glad that you enjoyed Bill's role in this story and enjoyed reading it. Thanks very much for taking the time to leave your lovely review.
Date: 11/20/11 04:48 pm Title: Peach Me, I Must Be Dreaming
Well, that was... peachy :D.
But really well written, very erotic touch. Bill should eat peaches every day. :)
Author's Response: Yikes...so sorry for the delay in my reply!!rnrnThank you for your comments, and that you found it erotic. But then anything Bill puts in his mouth is bound to look good...LOL! I really enjoy your writing so the compliment is definitely appreciated. <3
Date: 11/18/11 10:18 pm Title: Peach Me, I Must Be Dreaming
I feel an overwhelming need to go find and devour a fresh peach now. Zoinks.
Author's Response: LOL! I love peaches so after Engel's Hemmingway comment, I had the idea of what Bill would look like eating a peach stuck in my mind. I still do. rnrnThanks and hope you get your fresh peach soon. ;)
Date: 11/15/11 11:33 pm Title: Peach Me, I Must Be Dreaming
I liked!! :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 11/15/11 05:37 pm Title: Peach Me, I Must Be Dreaming
"The good parts of a book may be only something a writer is lucky enough to overhear or it may be the wreck of his whole damn life — and one is as good as the other."
Ernest Hemingway
Author's Response: I think this is a good thing...my cold isn't making me read this clearly, so I'm going to err on the side of caution, take the middle road on it and work on making my next fic(s) better. rnrnThanks as always! <3
Date: 11/15/11 05:25 pm Title: Peach Me, I Must Be Dreaming
Damn now I'll think peaches are sexy for all eternity, damn you Bill x)
Author's Response: He has a habit of doing that, I think it's his dastardly plan. Thanks for reading and reviewing!