Date: 04/30/23 11:36 pm Title: The Tailor of Hamburg
I have left a review on other stories of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too!
Date: 03/23/12 11:31 pm Title: The Tailor of Hamburg
I reread this *small smile* Just fabulous, just the right amount of disturbed.
Date: 02/23/12 02:36 pm Title: The Tailor of Hamburg
Wow. This was really... different. o_o I mean, really different from what I've read. I really liked this. Nice way to get back to reading twincest. :-)
Date: 02/19/12 03:07 am Title: Little Mermaid
This was really good. There were a few grammatical errors, but nothing too bad. This was truly beautiful =)
Date: 06/14/11 03:15 am Title: Kokoro
well, ive certainly never read something like this, it intrigues me a lot, looking forward to the final part, seams quite promising n.n
Date: 06/13/11 09:33 pm Title: Kokoro
i loved the parts where B.I.L.L. is alone in a destructed world... it makes me remember the history channel´s series...well in spanish it´s called "La tierra sin humanos" but i don´t know the name in english, it could be "The world without humans" but i´m not really sure. That series make me remember how fragile is our society, i watcher that after a thousand years there will be no trace of human buildings and other constructions... well to finish with my review i just have to say that you wrote really the parts of a desolated world, it transmits really well the feeling of melancholy or whatever the fuck it´s called.
I´ll be looking forward to read more :)
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i´m still waiting for your other updates! :)
love love love :D
Author's Response: Yeah in English I'm pretty sure it's called "Life After Humans" or in Spanish "The Land Without Humans" same thing. So very glad that you are enjoying this so far!
Date: 06/13/11 08:09 pm Title: Kokoro
I really LOVE futuristic fics, and this is just perfect. You have the sort of sterile, robotic nature of the city, technology, and (of course) Bill, but you incorporated emotion as well. Tom's disappointment and the desolation of the ruins you interspersed in the story are really that much more profound when contrasted with the coldness of this future society. Can't wait for part two!
Author's Response: Thank you *takes a bow* part two should be coming up within the next week or two.
Date: 06/13/11 06:16 pm Title: Kokoro
this is shit intriguing, im eager to see how this goes and hopefully the journey through this will be awesome! :)
Author's Response: Be warned... you will cry. You will cry a lot... or at least I did. This fic is based off of a song and it's so heartbreaking.
Date: 06/13/11 06:05 pm Title: Kokoro
LMAO was his singing that bad >.< I look forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Ahh yeah Bill can't sing in this :P
But in the next chapter you'll find out why
Date: 06/13/11 06:04 pm Title: Kokoro
very nice, but what about Rotkäppchen?
Author's Response: Rotkäppchen's next update depends on when I can muster up the strength to write werewolf smut since the next chapter involves Bill having a wet dream. As strange as it sounds it takes a lot of energy to write smut, plus with the Big Bang going on, and this new Victorian era fic I've really been wanting to write.... the next update for Rotkäppchen would be around the third week of June of the second week of July. However I have a deadline to finish it by Christmas so if anything there's going to be a shit load of updates during the later summer and fall
Date: 04/11/11 10:35 pm Title: The Tailor of Hamburg
This was like really beautiful thank you for further explaining it :3
Date: 04/06/11 05:43 pm Title: The Tailor of Hamburg
So goood
Date: 04/05/11 12:36 pm Title: The Tailor of Hamburg
wow i didnt quite understand a whole lot of it but im guessing Bill was hallucinating tom as his lover and was obsessed with him? :) it was really good :)
Author's Response: Yes Bill had always admired Tom from afar but when his obsessive love for Tom became too much, Bill started living in this fantasy world where he actually believed that he was in a relationship with Tom. He would tell the people around him in so much detail of his fantasy, that other people believed that he was telling the truth thus furthering Bill's fragile state.
But when Bill saw Tom with his real wife and then real daughter, rage consumed him as he thought in his sick little head that Tom was cheating on him. He killed Tom's wife and daughter and then stole their clothes.
Then he dressed up in the dead women's clothes and went to Tom's door thinking that he was now the ideal person Tom would want to be with. Tom obviously did not know who Bill was and so Bill killed him as his fantasy was shattered
Date: 03/17/11 05:33 pm Title: Daughter of Evil
My heart broke lol, It was a good story I loved it
Date: 03/13/11 06:43 pm Title: The Tailor of Hamburg
OMG!!!! That was amazing! I love that this story had me going for a while about how Tom was being a jerk to Bill but dang I didn't see that coming. Great job really amazing
Date: 03/13/11 04:48 am Title: The Tailor of Hamburg
You're welcome! I really like you're writing style
:)
Date: 03/12/11 11:38 pm Title: The Tailor of Hamburg
Ohmy, I enjoyed this :)
It's so twisted and fun, and absolutely awesome, in my opinion.
I kind if figured it was either Tom or Bill killing the girls.
Also, that song is pretty good, not gonna lie. So yes, this was awesome. :D (sorry, I have fail commenting skills.)
Author's Response: The song kicks ass! The first time I heard it, I didn't know that it was supposed to be dark so I just kept humming along with the tune. Then at the end when Luka (the tailor shop girl with the pink hair) is standing over Kaito's body (blue haired man Luka was obsessed with) I was like "WAIT WHAT JUST HAPPENED?!?!?!"
Date: 03/12/11 03:49 pm Title: The Tailor of Hamburg
(reply) Oh, okay. Nevermind, I read it wrong. When I said little girl I meant the REALLY little girl, the four-year-old that Bill encountered. But she was unrelated.
Also, I strongly suggest changing "the father to a family of three" to "the father in* a family of three". Heh, otherwise it gives the impression that besides Tom, there were three members. Which is why I thought the child was Tom's youngest daughter. Again, sorry, didn't read that as carefully.
Date: 03/12/11 01:36 pm Title: The Tailor of Hamburg
That was really interesting! I'm just confused about one thing... if Bill didn't know Tom, then was the whole rape scene a delusion? I feel like that's a dumb question, but oh well! =)
Author's Response: It's not a dumb question...but yeah Bill imagined that all. If you notice he broke out of his trance and was all alone. O at times when he saw Tom so little in the apartment, that it felt like Bill was all alone in it
Date: 03/12/11 06:58 am Title: The Tailor of Hamburg
Ok, I just have to review again to say that there were quite a few hints about the true world and not Bill's fantasy, but it was still unexpected to say the least. (And + points for mentioning Jack the Ripper! I'm fascinated with serial killers). And I just have to say that I'm feeling more and more terrible for Bill. He'd created a whole fantasy world, and the crazy thing is that he functions normally and not all his life is a fantasy. He has his tailor shop and gets by nicely and then he just lapses into his fantasy world just like that, like they overlap and that is just so much more haunting that him creating everything up, cus then he won't seem normal and would be labelled as a crazy guy.... Bill! *hugs* I wonder what'll happen to him now? (And him turning up at Tom's house wearing that dress and the hairpin is just... incredible.) So, now he's killed Tom... will he realise the truth, or will he still continue to believe that Tom was his lover...? But wait... towards the end of the story, Bill's walking away from the 'pub' and mad that Tom treated him like a stranger, so I guess he still doesn't get it, huh? So next morning he's gonna hear about Tom's death and think he was killed by some murderer.... But then Hannah would know the truth, right? She knows about Tom, and she felt uneasy about Bill that morning, so she would realise what happened... I love you. Marry me.