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Reviewer: Smilee Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/22/13 10:31 pm Title: Jumping Feet First

About the end notes. Dreads aren't smelly. You can wash them, but you wash them a certain way. -.-'' loved the story though.💋c6;

Reviewer: angelbaby2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/09/12 12:26 am Title: A Soft Landing

loved it!

Author's Response: Thank u for reviewing! Glad u enjoyed!! :)

Reviewer: angelbaby2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/09/12 12:21 am Title: A Soft Landing

loved it!

Reviewer: jackie4244 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/08/12 09:20 pm Title: A Soft Landing

Fin. Good job!

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

Reviewer: angelbaby2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/20/12 04:27 am Title: A Soft Landing

loved it! can't wait to see what will happen next!

Author's Response: thank you so much!! :)

Reviewer: angelbaby2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/20/12 04:18 am Title: A Soft Landing

loved it!

Reviewer: angelbaby2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/20/12 04:12 am Title: A Soft Landing

loved it!

Reviewer: angelbaby2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/20/12 04:02 am Title: A Soft Landing

loved it!

Reviewer: angelbaby2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/20/12 03:54 am Title: Jumping Feet First

loved it! can't wait to read the sequel!

Author's Response: Thanks for all your reviews!!! :) I'm really happy u enjoyed :)

Reviewer: angelbaby2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/20/12 03:45 am Title: Jumping Feet First

loved it!

Reviewer: BeCkY Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/27/12 03:07 pm Title: A Soft Landing

haha reading this made me smile :) glad u liked it!!! :)

Reviewer: Nena110189 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/18/12 01:07 am Title: A Soft Landing

"I know. And you still look so sexy. Everyone ages fourteen to forty want to rip off your clothes."  i laphed so hard when she said that i was spewing milk out my nose lol. cant wait for more loved it :)



Author's Response: haha reading this made me smile! :) glad u liked it! :)

Reviewer: Nena110189 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/18/12 01:03 am Title: A Soft Landing

OMG I LOVE IT AND ITS IM FIRST PERSON!!!!!!!! <3 <3 evything else i read is in thrid but fist is so hard to write it AMAZING i neeed more!!!!



Author's Response: :) thanks so much! :)

Reviewer: HappyYellowStickers Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/11 12:55 pm Title: Jumping Feet First

I'm EMO so I MUSt CUT my Wriste
I'm NOt natural BLONDE so I MUST be a Bitch
I'm a STRAIGHEDGE so I must be a perfect GOODY-TWO-SHOES

Reviewer: angelbaby2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/11/11 03:58 pm Title: Jumping Feet First

Loved it!

Reviewer: angelbaby2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/11/11 03:47 pm Title: Jumping Feet First

Loved it!

Reviewer: bassist17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/13/11 09:46 pm Title: Jumping Feet First

A Tom's POV or something like that would be appreciated :D

Author's Response: i know! i never get on to fix it but I plan on it! thanks for the input! :)

Reviewer: gigglebot Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/08/11 11:33 pm Title: Jumping Feet First

I really like this, its a cool concept. I think the you should write who's point of viwe it is because it gets a little bit confusing, other than that it was great!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the input!!! =] i know, its quite confusing! I'm hoping i can go back and edit the story and add the povs! :P *hugglz* thanks for the review! =]rnrn~BECKY~

Reviewer: bassist17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/08/11 06:09 pm Title: Jumping Feet First

It'd be great if there paragraphs said something like **Tom'sPOV** or something lol

Author's Response: ill try to go back and edit them so they have! i know, it is a lil confusing :P that was part of the fun ;) haha but i shall try to get back and do it! :)

Reviewer: angelbaby2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/14/11 09:05 pm Title: Jumping Feet First

loved IT!

Author's Response: awww thanks so much!!! =] more up soon =]

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