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Reviewer: ura_hd Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/17/20 01:01 am Title: Bilateral

Congrats on being featured! I’ve always loved this story! d84;a039;

Reviewer: Chiro Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/11/20 03:50 pm Title: Bilateral

😍😍

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Date: 03/10/20 03:11 pm Title: Bilateral

Reviewer: Zarlina Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/05/19 04:18 pm Title: Bilateral

I know you're not here anymore, but I just have to tell you, even if you'll never see it, that I've read this story so many times, and every time I reread it, it takes my breath away. It's so beautiful, so painful, and so perfectly written. Thank you for this, it's absolutely stunning.

Reviewer: Billitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/13/16 05:16 am Title: Idioglossia

The feels for the twins......sigh*
Let me tell you a secret....shh..quiet now...the secret is...........................I love you!
You're the best favorite author of my favorites X3

Reviewer: Billitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/13/16 04:55 am Title: Cochlea

Reads like this make me wish hearts can be detached from our bodies so we can attach them back after the moment's passed. ;_;
;_;
You write like euphoria.

Reviewer: Billitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/13/16 04:18 am Title: Bilateral

......dumbstruck......

Favorited......thank you for writing!

Reviewer: Ms Maril Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/21/15 07:11 pm Title: Bilateral

This was such a raw, emotional story and I loved every second of it. Brava! :)

Reviewer: ura_hd Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/20/13 01:29 am Title: Cochlea

What a sad story... Very skillfully written.

Reviewer: ura_hd Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/20/13 01:04 am Title: Bilateral

Oh, poor Bill. My heart feels for him. You write so emotionally! Great story!

Reviewer: bluethorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/12 06:29 pm Title: Bilateral

And what a labor of love this is. This story was very thought-provoking for me, in a introspective way. I absolutely love your poetic prose; it's sublime. All I can think to say is that you are this story are beautiful. It pains me to think that if I contract Cerebral Acromatopsia, I probably wouldn't have a "Tom" around to cuddle and console me when I go into melancholic states. Or at least no one I care for like Bill does Tom. I thought about how painful, monumental situations, such as Bill and Tom's, that make you become grateful for what you had or have. It's a lesson or virtue I wish to learn now rather than through a traumatic but rewarding experience. All in all, I'm thankful for reading this story and I wish you a lovely day.

Merry part,
Bluethorn

Reviewer: Ryuuzaki_L Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/19/12 08:28 pm Title: Cochlea

I had this bookmarked for months and for whatever unexplained reason hadn't read it until now. I'm so glad I finally got to do it, and I just saw there are also a couple more in this universe, which makes me very happy.

I absolutely loved it - immediately favorited it. It's so weird that I avoid reading stuff with certain topics - eating disorders, disabilities, bullying etc. - because they're rarely done right and I end up disappointed, yet your fics are so well-done that not only do I read them, but I end up loving them too. Wishbones is one of my most favorite stories ever. Retrograde had felt like a strong punch in the gut when I finished it. Star of David makes me feel so uncomfortable and sad, yet all I want is moooore. This one made me ache in the best of ways.

My point is, you have a great way to portray thoughts and feelings that mostly make the reader feel compassion and maybe even sadness. I'm so glad you got to write for this fandom. I know how important it is to get feedback and I, like you, don't review that much because I always feel I don't have anything helpful to say. But lately, I'm trying to change that because it's never pointless to leave a nice word.

Anyway, sorry for rambling. I loved this and thank you for writing. It's always a pleasure to read something from you.

Author's Response:

Awww no, no, don't apologize for rambling! I like rambling! I like it lots! (And I tend to do it too.)

rn

I'm so flattered, it makes me so happy to know that you and others think they're well done. That's my biggest intent with them; I really hate when people write disorders/disabilities/conditions and they're poorly done and not realistic and not believable. I like to make them true to life as much as I can and I don't like stigmas. So.

rn

And aw you've read my two long stupid stories that just mostly annoy me now. I'm glad you want more! You must always want more! Always. (It gives me purpose.)

rn

I JUST REALLY LIKE MAKING PEOPLE FEEL FEELS.

rn

Okay yes thank you so much you're v lovely and hi hello I also have read a few of your things and have them favorited.

Reviewer: nakedbones Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/27/12 09:57 pm Title: Idioglossia

ANDY Y U DO THIS TO ME

Reviewer: nakedbones Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/27/12 07:47 pm Title: Cochlea

This is definitely my favorite of everything of yours I've ever read and that hasn't changed. *_* This is all good things.

Reviewer: nakedbones Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/27/12 05:54 pm Title: Bilateral

You make my soul weep, Andy. ;_;

Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/19/12 12:27 am Title: Idioglossia

Fascinating! I wouldn't call it a speech disorder though, since it's still a systematic language with rules and order... and it was brought about by severe psychological trauma... but who am I to question wikipedia and an established term?

Very interesting read, tragic and precious all at the same time.

Author's Response:

Idioglossia/cryptophasia isn't a disorder. It's a phenomenon. Their selective mutism (or mostly mutism because they don't speak to anyone but each other) is the disorder. However, because their idioglossia extended past the prime age range for it to occur and appeared later in life - actually, it developed later in life here, not continued from any point - it is considered an issue as they're speaking their own language and only to each other, and showing mutism and catatonia to anyone else.

Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/28/12 01:36 am Title: Bilateral

This was neat! I didn't imagine colorblindness being too much of a disability except for traffic lights, but no! Limited vision in bright and low light situations, emotional distress from no more color... and also safety issues! You couldn't see a flashing light, or maybe details on the ground where you're walking, and discolored food that may be moldy. And more things, I'm sure! Like when I go hiking, the fire hazard warning is always a colored insert into the sign.

And how sad, that he painted his ceiling with brilliant colors only to lose sight of them. :(

Thanks for educating me on this! I have worked with a child with a significant visual impairment, and I remember thinking about what color toys we'd play with, and making sure to put down a colored mat with large sections of yellow, blue, and red on it... and then I put the contrasting color toys on it. This kid taught me a lot about working with kids with visual impairment.

And now, this. You've shown me some of the functional and emotional limitations people with visual impairment can face. Props! Very nicely done, and I love the twinliness. Does Tom blame himself because he was driving?

Author's Response:

Why, thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it and especially could relate back to it. My goal is always to educate and break misconceptions and misunderstandings about things. 

rn

Good question, too. Tom doesn't blame himself for it because he couldn't control it. He wasn't speeding or anything stupid, it was a tire blowout and he lost control of the vehicle. Out of his hands, he couldn't do anything except get Bill and himself out of the car. 

Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/27/12 11:28 pm Title: Cochlea

OMG THAT ENDING

Reviewer: MissAnna Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/20/11 10:24 am Title: Cochlea

I don't have words to describe how this made me feel. It was like fate.

Reviewer: ChunyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/30/11 03:04 pm Title: Bilateral

This is so sad. Poor Bill. I love the story!

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