Date: 11/18/11 06:09 pm Title: Broken Spirit
very good, please update soon! xx
Date: 03/02/11 06:01 pm Title: Bruised and Beaten
Woah...poor Bill. I'd love to know what happened for him to get in that situation in the first place? This was pretty sad but very well written :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 09/30/10 09:29 pm Title: Broken Spirit
Very good I really hope you write more.. Kinda like finish it... K lol I hope to read more soon bye bye
Date: 09/23/10 12:39 am Title: Broken Spirit
ahhhrrg!! *is frustrated* so close! SO CLOSE! to finding out how he ended up with Tom...damn. this is pretty good so far. I can't wait for more....gotta love me some pimp!Tom and abused!Bill...dunno why but i do.
Date: 09/23/10 12:27 am Title: Bruised and Beaten
*kidnaps Bill* poor baby it'll be ok. very nice pimpfic. is it wrong of me to love pimpfic so much? because i do a lot.
Author's Response: Psh who doesn't? Pimpfic is just *___*
Date: 08/21/10 01:37 pm Title: Broken Spirit
poor bill ):
cant wait till the next chapter!
Date: 08/20/10 05:46 am Title: Broken Spirit
Hmm. very interesting, with Jost. I liked that. My guess is Tom is one of his children? I think? I love the idea of Fatherly!Jost and Son!Bill. Can we have more flashbacks of it? :) It's so sweet, and we barely have any father/son [in an innocent way] pairings on THF. :( So David acting as his father was sooooo sweeeettahhh. :3
Very nice fic, do continue! ^_^
Author's Response: I know! I hate Jost as a pervert! He can be so much more than that! I'll see what else I can do with that character pairing, even after Jost's death.
Date: 08/20/10 05:45 am Title: Broken Spirit
Lalalal I feel like reviewing again b/c this needs more reviews. If you don't mind :)
Author's Response: You make me very happy Cherryrose! Thanks for supporting this humble little ficcie!!
Date: 08/20/10 05:38 am Title: Broken Spirit
Interesting and tragic start, which is good. xD I like it. Will read on
Author's Response: Thanks for your interest in my little ficcie! I'll try and get updates in as soon as possible!
Date: 08/20/10 02:17 am Title: Broken Spirit
this is a really awesome story
great chapters btw :]
i really can't wait to read more :D
Date: 08/20/10 12:17 am Title: Broken Spirit
I like it, its really good...dislike David's children though, can't wait to read more.
Date: 08/20/10 12:12 am Title: Broken Spirit
Just finished reading the parent story and these two chapter's and I gotta say-Bills life is hell on earth! That boy need's a saviour and some luck, and Tom need's a good ole' fashion ass kickin'!
Looking forward to more
Date: 07/22/10 06:24 pm Title: Broken Spirit
i read the previous story and i really liked it so I'm really happy you decided to make a sequel, i just hope you update soon again=D
Whoa!! Tom is such a bad ass pimp!lol
Poor Bill, it wasn't his fault that stuoid guy wanted to rape him!
Author's Response: Yes..I'm happy to give this to you guys. This is a co-write so there may be a little lull between chapters as we both deal with very busy lives and travelling, but we'll try and not make it so long a wait between chapters for you guys.
Date: 07/09/10 11:32 am Title: Broken Spirit
I think this is the first fic I'm reading where Tom isn't nice. I look forward to the rest of it.
Author's Response: Going to make it interseting and full of drama. Stay tuned!
Date: 07/09/10 07:39 am Title: Broken Spirit
WoW,,, Poor Bill :[ Went from one hell to another.... Tom has got some major anger issues!!! I like the way you guys are heading with the story. :D
Author's Response: Lots of drama coming our way! Stay tuned!
Date: 07/09/10 04:56 am Title: Broken Spirit
omg! I'm so happy that y'all made a sequel!! I saw this and was like OMG!! i hope y'all can up date soon
Author's Response: We are attempting to update quickly. Coordinating schedules is the challenge. Stay tuned. We're working on it! Thanks for reading!
Date: 06/24/10 09:42 pm Title: Bruised and Beaten
Hey AJ. Check your email. I sent you an email with details on our co-author. Coming from Jaxster84@yahoo.com. *Huggles!*
Author's Response: *huggles*
Date: 06/24/10 02:53 pm Title: Bruised and Beaten
I would love to go forward with ths one. I don't IM either so email is my only otion too. Are you up for a co write? Do you even have the time? Are you in school? If you're not in the mood for the work it would take to co write, I'd love to take it and run with it myself. I'd give you full credit for the initial story and I would link it back to your original story. I've already got some fantastic ideas to further this story! You have some great imagination too! What's your final word/thought?
Author's Response: Nah, I'm out of school for summer, starting suspended anyway. If you'd like to relay your ideas we could probably coauthor for it. *shrug* I just got another review and someone else wants a sequel as well xD
Date: 06/24/10 08:05 am Title: Bruised and Beaten
*le gasp* You MUST write a sequel where Tom has sex (rough?) with Bill!!!!! Oh god this is so damn good! DO IT, DO IT, DO IT, DO MOTHEREFFING IT!!!!!!
Author's Response: Well it's looking as if this might end up a multi, coauthored with someone else. I have no idea why people want more of this, honestly, because I was just pissed off at everything xD
Date: 06/24/10 01:41 am Title: Bruised and Beaten
That was violent, but it is too much of a good start to just be a one shot! I want to know more. How did Bill get out of there? Did he get back oK? Is he going to fight his way out of that life? I need more! This needs a resolution! I Would love to comtinue this and co-write it with you! Contact me if interested!
Author's Response: O_O Oh, uh. Well I just did this because I was angry and wanted to fictionally get someone beaten the crap out of xD I guess, if you want, we could coauthor. Or you could continue on your own, if you'd like. It would probably be really complicated to co, because I can't use IM or anything right now, so the only way possible would be to email. But if you want to write it, I really don't mind ^^