Date: 10/26/12 05:31 pm Title: Beneath
Loved it <3 so yummy I love when Bill is slutty *u*
Date: 02/29/12 03:53 am Title: Tell me it's a lie
ahhh, perfect:)
Date: 02/28/12 09:36 am Title: RIP
hihi!! yeah Scotty, bite this gangsta ass for fucking our innocent, little Billy:)
Date: 02/27/12 01:13 pm Title: Fuck you, cupid!
wow...just fucking perfect...one of the best rape scenes I've read!!! hats off!
Date: 05/08/11 10:49 am Title: Beneath
Oh, how this was worth the agonizing wait! This piece was my reward for finishing my last project, and what a reward it was! It was all steamy and serious until the pants- such a Bushido thing to do and it really made me crack up at the end XD Great job!
Author's Response: Oh, well, thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed :D
Date: 02/03/11 03:57 pm Title: RIP
awwww that was sad.. but damn i cant stop laughing. poor Bu's ass lol.
Author's Response: Yep, poor Bu's ass, but I'm sure Bill made up with him for that.
Date: 02/03/11 03:20 pm Title: RIP
Awww, I liked this fic, too *.* Your Bushido is quite close to the one I like to write/read, it's a pleasure to read your Billshidos :) I like the way he would never hurt Bill, yet he's not OVERLY protective or something like that... I mean, he knows Bill is not a doll and he can't break easily, so he still fucks him without preparing him, for example. That's something I liked :)
And then, all these flashbacks about Bu, Bill and Scotty showing that Bu is a bit... melancholic? about the dog's death (at least, that's what I've decided to read between lines XD), those were good, because he's trying to make us think he hated the dog, but I guess he misses him a little, now.
What else? Oh, yeah! I loved that part where Bushido said he would've felt bad if Tom was sick, because then Bill would be too, and Anis didn't want that! Cool :)
Waiting for more...? =P
Author's Response: Hi! haha, how fast, I'm very glad you liked it that just makes me write more XDrnDon't worry, there'll be more!
Date: 02/03/11 08:44 am Title: RIP
This was a bit sad but I loved it. I'm so happy to see that this is apart of a series. The site needs a little more Bilshido. :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much :) the site will have more billshido don't worry I'll take care of that XD
Date: 02/02/11 04:34 pm Title: Beneath
Cute & dirty, a winning combination b29; I like.
Date: 02/02/11 01:39 pm Title: Beneath
Oh, this was good! *_* I'm always happy to find good Billshido fics like this one here on THF, there aren't many. You did a great job!
I loved the characterizations, with Bu being rough and possessive, but also caring and protective. And when he told Bill he loved him in Arabic (did I get that right?), oh God, you totally had me there!
It was also good because I didn't expect all of that "whore" thing at the beginning to be all a game! I was thinking this was an AU fic or something, and then Bill talked about not wanting to play anymore, calling Anis by his name, and I was like "OMG it's Billshido for real, then!" XD Yeah, I know, I'm stupid like that *facepalm*
Well, thank you for the good Billshido, I needed it ;)
Author's Response: Didn't think people would even like this, it was just an idea stuck in my mind but well, glad you liked it. I always try to keep my characters as real as possible so I spend I lot of time watching videos in order to know how they really are and I guess it worked just right. And yes, Bu said I love you in his mother language, I find it hot anyway XDrnPay attention, cuz another Billshido is coming! ;)
Date: 02/02/11 07:34 am Title: Beneath
it was super,i would havr never thought english was not your first language;)
Author's Response: Thanks, and yes, I don't spak english as my mother language but I try to do my best.
Date: 02/01/11 08:27 am Title: Beneath
This was hot! I loved the ending. Ooooh! The next one-shot maybe have Tom walk in on Bushido and Bill when there in the moment. Tom just freaks out. That would be funny!
Author's Response: I'm very glad you liked it. And about the sugestion, I don't promise anything but yes, I have a thing planned with the twins and Bushido ;)rnThanks for reading!
Date: 02/01/11 06:03 am Title: Beneath
awesome. I love it. *___*
Author's Response: Well thank you very much.
Date: 02/01/11 05:47 am Title: Beneath
:D.. I love BILLSHIDO... i had fun reading this story... thank you, for sharing it.. :)
Author's Response: Good to know there're some billshido fans out there. Thanks for reading!
Date: 02/01/11 05:12 am Title: Beneath
A really great job and I mean it. The characterizations were really GOOD and the way you made it is just... mesmerizing.
I found one little mistake: In english you never put the action before the one person that is talking:
“Turn around, baby” said the man against the singer’s lips after biting gently the lower one; after a pout and a husky chuckle the singer complied and turned around slowly to flop on his belly, looking back at the other male. He almost whined when Bushido stood up and walked away to the bedside little table and coming back with a bottle of lube in his hand, throwing it to the bed.
There, see? It'll have to be 'the man said', not the other way around.
Anyways, I'll be looking forward to this ;)
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it :D the mistake has been corrected. Thanks for reading!
Date: 09/16/10 08:49 pm Title: Valentine's chocolates
That was lovely. I liked the way you portrayed Bill & Georg...very sweet, with a wonderful hint of innocence. Not easy to achieve when writing lemons. :)
Author's Response: *laughs* specially when the author is such a slut with lemons xDrnThanks for reading!
Date: 07/25/10 06:04 am Title: Valentine's chocolates
very sweet story^^
Date: 07/07/10 12:24 pm Title: Valentine's chocolates
this was cute! i liked it :)
Author's Response: Oh, thanks!
Date: 06/04/10 04:03 pm Title: Fuck you, cupid!
el final es diferente no?digo al que esta en español?¡
es más deseperado..creo..
y tiene más...pero está..cool..jeje..por ti omito la palabra chevere
de mi vocabulario...T_T..jaja..
si puedes..solo si puedes..sigue traduciendo..le haces un mal a las personas que no pueden leer en español
por no permitirles leer tus fics..que son geniales..en serio...
pero buscaré un billshido cursi..porque quiero decir.."awwwww"..xDDDDDDDDDDDD
oki
besos y abrazos
Date: 06/04/10 02:38 pm Title: Tell me it's a lie
Oh God... I kept telling myself "Don't let the character death-thingy fool you" while reading 'cause I would get all emotional and stuff;) I'm kinda masochistic, because I like sad stories but I hate crying, and they always make me cry. Good story! Hmm, maybe you could write something dark about Tom and Bushido fighting over Bill? *puppy eyes*
Author's Response: First of all, thanks for reading and leaving a review.rnrnAnd about the suggestion, I may do it, that depends of my inspiration but first I have to translate the other one-shots that are part of the series to start writing new ones, so, a little of patience here.