Date: 01/26/19 05:15 am Title: Die Wächter
this was a really good story!!
Date: 04/01/18 08:37 pm Title: In A Time Of Need
this was a really good story!!
Date: 07/13/17 11:17 am Title: In A Time Of Need
Hello, I really don't know what to say.
I mean, you had a great idea, even if it could have been written in a slightly better way, but it really was original and promising.
But there something I just can't understand : you went all the way to made Bill an intersexe, making him able to get pregnant in a completely realistic way, and in the end you just threw it all away.
I'm not mad about the miscarriage, with his lead poisoning it would surely have happened anyway, but you could have made him get pregnant again, or at least let him have one child, and not just say "Well, life is a bitch : get over it"
So, to be honest, I'm quite disappointed.
I'll read it 'till the end nonetheless, but only because I think that if you start to read something you have to finish it, even if it's not like what you wanted it to be.
It doesn't mean I don't respect your work or anything, I myself can't write to save my life, and I think you're awesome to put so much time and effort in your stories, it's just that this one didn't went the way I would have liked.
I wait your next story with impatience.
Bye bye.
Date: 12/15/16 04:50 am Title: Die Wächter
This story is absolutely gorgeous.
Date: 03/19/16 09:31 am Title: Die Wächter
This story was amazing and beautifull. I loved it and I'm amazed from toes to head.
Angeleyes
Date: 03/13/16 09:02 am Title: In A Time Of Need
Hi Synnie,
Before my review rid I must say, however, that I understand the English language quite well and have thanks to my Kindle, the story really well understood but unfortunately not as good' for that matter Written. So I wrote my review in German and translated with the help of Google. I hope it does not sound too bad, and you know what I want to tell you ....
I read your story and I am thrilled. I wanted not stopped reading.
The idea to write something from the middle ages I really liked and it was interesting to read how different the lives of Tom and Bill are - just because they live in different centuries - and they have fallen in love anyway. Apparently knows love really no time and no space. However, I must also say that I am incredibly happy to live in the 21st century - with toothbrush, toothpaste, cotton buds, running water, toilets and showers, etc.
When Bill was back in his time again I imagine that George and Tom were so totally overwhelmed because everything we know them is so unknown.
All the more impressive, I find that Bill is coped with life what he has to perform at Tom. After all, he has renounced civilization and progress, because he actually knows. But I think for the love he has gladly waived because he knew that he would never find such a person as Tom again and that love helps him to do anything.
It was only important that he could be with the love of his life, no matter what time and in what place …
However, it was good that they brought Bill back to Berlin before he had to die. He was really very ill.
When I heard that it comes from the makeup and I had previously always read that he was feeling better without makeup, I first thought it would anyone want him intentionally poison but that's not true. They were then just not aware of how dangerous lead is real. But fortunately Dr. Meyer helped Bill and he could back later to Tom.
Sad was natural that Bill has lost her baby. I honestly believed in a miracle and thought the doctor in Berlin was wrong and Bill will make it discharge the baby and bring it to the world. But unfortunately, fate has provided something else for him.
That Hannah scored the child for him I found really great, so I did not expect. I was totally shocked when I had read that she is pregnant by Tom. Fortunately, everything turned out well in the end and so Tom and Bill can look stretched in a future that promises them grandchildren.
Big praise for your story. It is simply stunning, captivating, enthralling, partly sad but and just plain reading.
Thanks for the very good story.
Greetings Angeleyes
Date: 07/12/15 06:31 am Title: In A Time Of Need
It was a wondeful story to read. The time and context were so original ! I really enjoyed it.
Date: 05/19/15 12:09 am Title: Die Wächter
Of course I'll give you love one last time! I had too much fun reading this to not. I'm yawning like crazy cuz I've been sleep deprived for a few nights and I probably should be in bed right now but I just had to finish this. I think you know pretty well that I didn't like how they killed the monks but that has got to be the only part I actually disliked. This story is really freaking amazing. The amount of research and editing that must have gone into this to make it so flawless... Whew!! I loved and hated and related to all of the characters.I went crazy and yelled unprintable things at the screen, swooned numerous times into the pile of laundry next to me that I haven't gotten around to putting away, and cried so hard when they were imprisoned in Isengard (I forgot how to spell the other name, excuse me while I look it up... Blarhol😊). And I know it's a little late in the story to be agreeing but Georg really does look devestating in that armor. I'm going to wrap up my rambles before you get sick of me ...or I fall asleep ...or my iPod battery dies... Bye!!!
Date: 05/18/15 11:58 pm Title: Die Wächter
Yes! Cal is back. I always saw him looking like Gil Ofarim. I love Gil Ofarim. :D And Tova's death was necessary. I kinda liked her at the end but Tøm and Ville need to be exclusive with each other after what they went through. And Aslak is a darling!
Date: 05/18/15 11:46 pm Title: Die Wächter
I'm still exhausted from my celebration of last chapter but this one was also amazing. 😘😘😘😘
Date: 05/18/15 11:29 pm Title: Die Wächter
YOU CAN NOT FREAKING KNOW HOW MUCH I ADOOOOOORE THIS CHAPTER!!!!! TØM AND HE WENT CRAZY AND I'M IN LOVE BUT NEVER MIND THAT HE AND VILLE AND I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!!!!! * runs off and continues screaming and dancing weird dances*
Date: 05/18/15 11:23 pm Title: Die Wächter
Aw, I agree! Haleth is adorable and I love him.
Date: 05/18/15 11:19 pm Title: Die Wächter
I knew there was LOTR inspiration for the keep. And what are you doing to poor Ville!?!? I knew that rat scum Haldør was behind it all - may his body be covered with pus filled sores and his lungs coated with pulverized glass!!!!
Date: 05/18/15 11:08 pm Title: Die Wächter
Okay, so maybe Tova isn't that bad. And that charge into battle reminded me of Rohan's charge in the battle for Gondor. Was it inspired by that?
Date: 05/18/15 11:00 pm Title: Die Wächter
I refuses to let my wholesome hatred of Tova to be poisoned by pity.
Date: 05/18/15 10:54 pm Title: Die Wächter
That's right Ville!! You show that bitch Tova who's the boss. Aslak, on the other hand, is adorable. And he does look familiar ...where have I seen that face before? jk. Ha! I have that face memorized.
Date: 05/18/15 10:44 pm Title: Die Wächter
I thought you had killed Tøm!!!!! But mortally wounded is fine with me. ;) Goodness knows I adore the pathos of a long withheld love confession at a sickbed. Seriously. I dream the twins like that so often it's not even funny.
Date: 05/18/15 10:37 pm Title: Die Wächter
I thought after what was said at the dragon's lair that they didn't care for gold since it was only to win women over and who needs women?
I'm so horribly impatient!! Bad bad me!! I can't help it. I need them to be completely in love NOOOOOOOOWW!!!!! Ok, I'm zipping it. Back to story.
Date: 05/18/15 10:14 pm Title: Die Wächter
Hm, I strongly disagree with the choice of a monastery for the raid. It looked like only slaughtering to me and no actually fighting. It wasn't glorious or brave or honorable. Not only that but the monks in those times were pretty much the ones who brought literature to that part of the world. Many of them dedicated their entire lives to copying books with exquisite calligraphy and art.
The last part I did like though. I mean, COME ON!!! They finally did it. Now all they have to do is kiss. :D And am I just being paranoid or is there going to be more trouble with Tova? Lets read on and see, shall we?
Date: 05/18/15 09:57 pm Title: Die Wächter
Okay, I'm gonna take back what I said before. Now I thoroughly detest stupid Tova. Who does she think she is?!?