Date: 04/30/23 10:24 pm Title: When You Lose Something You Cannot Replace
I have left a review on other stories of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too!
Date: 05/05/19 09:38 am Title: Confusion Never Stops
Have found this story and its predecessor today and before I start reading I wanted to ask if the second part is ever finished? I guess rather no, since it has been a long time since the story was started and you are rather no longer active?
Date: 12/07/13 04:43 am Title: When You Lose Something You Cannot Replace
This is an amazing story. Pure brilliance!
Date: 09/03/13 01:17 am Title: Confusion Never Stops
Soooo any chance you might be updating this if your muse returns? I'm sure you get bombarded with reviewers begging for more chapters because EVERY SINGLE ONE OF YOUR STORIES IS AWESOME...but really, they are. I'm trying to restrain myself from begging about three other stories...*trying*...I don't want to be too annoying, you know.
Anyway, I really hope you're doing well, and I'm going to selfishly hope that you get inspired and a little chapter pops up :)
Date: 06/09/13 07:53 am Title: Confusion Never Stops
Please don't abandon this story. It's so good and I'd love to read more. Bill seems to need more help than he leads on. It's nice that Tom cares about him like a brother. I pray that Bill gets the help he so desperately needs.
Date: 01/12/12 11:49 pm Title: Confusion Never Stops
This is fantastic work. I really like it so far and I hope you continue it soon!
Date: 08/02/11 01:38 pm Title: Confusion Never Stops
This is fantastic work. Thanks.
Date: 08/02/11 11:28 am Title: When You Lose Something You Cannot Replace
Fantastic conversation between Tom and Simone.
Date: 04/13/11 08:19 pm Title: When You Lose Something You Cannot Replace
I really enjoy this story and how their relationship is blossoming slowly. I can't stand when they're in love by the fourth chapter, aha.
I just have a little thing to say, and you're probably going to hate me for it 'cause it's quite heated costrustive critisism.
When I read about Bill's eating disorder, it really isn't exactly anorexia. I've had anorexia and it's the scariest and most depressing thing I've ever gone through, and I've had a death of a family member and a knife pulled on me. So you can see how terrifying it is. :P
I totally understand as to WHY Bill would have anorexia because he's definetly not in control of his life, therefor he controls his eating to make up for that. I get it. But anorexia is so much more than just not eating. It's about thinking about food 24/7, dreaming about calories, seeing fat on your body that isn't there, never being happy. Anorexic's aren't comfortable eating period-doesn't matter who's in front of them. And high caloric juice is definetly going to be on one's guilty mind for the rest of the day.
Just a little, well big, thing I thought I'd share.
I'm really impressed how you wrote the whole scene with Bill pushed the food around and hiding it, you really tapped into his character there. :)
He definetly has an eating disorder, but I don't think anorexia.
Sorry if it sounds like I'm being a bitch, but I've expierenced anorexia and it's not something to be taken lightly, even in a story.
Other than that I absolutely love this story. Bill's put through so much but he actaually handles it very well-so far. :P
Ps. I'm so jealous you're going to Germany AGAIN. I've never been there ONCE, lol. I'm going this summer though, tell me how you liked it and what I should expect. :P Are there lots of TH posters and stuff?
Please don't think I'm a bitch for ranting, it's just something personal and a real life nightmare and it's hard seeing it tossed around with ease.
Date: 02/09/11 09:17 pm Title: When You Lose Something You Cannot Replace
D:
This had me bawling my eyes out for the last ten chapters!
Does Bill remember that Bushido was the one who gave him the broken rib? And does he pretty much remember everything now? Or is it still a little patchy during his amnesia stage?
LOVED this story, though. It's been inspiring me to continue writing one of my old stories, so thank you!
I'm off to read the sequel now!
Date: 02/04/11 08:41 pm Title: When You Lose Something You Cannot Replace
"I instantly bit my tongue back. I wasn’t gay, was I? No, I didn’t think I was. I’d stared at too many girls already to be gay. Too many hot girls. So many hot tits and short skirts that I just wanted to find the nearest room, rip my pants to shreds, and shove my engorged-"
Oh dear god.
I laughed for like, 20 minutes.
Author's Response: Haha, I loved that line too. That was Bill's first big personal reveal haha xD
Date: 02/04/11 02:10 am Title: When You Lose Something You Cannot Replace
ugh bulimia...i saw on Tv about a model who was bulimic and she binged so much one day that by the time she reached the toilet to throw up, her stomach exploded and she died :(((( so tragic, it's so horrible that people fall into such patterns
Date: 02/04/11 01:11 am Title: When You Lose Something You Cannot Replace
waaaaaah! *tissues* aaaaw, I'm sorry if you have a rocky parental relationship...I am so happy to be very close to both of my parents, despite the fact that they dislike each other...(divorced 14 years ago) I know I am very very lucky, and I'm so sorry to anyone who can't have that. ;_;
Date: 02/04/11 12:58 am Title: When You Lose Something You Cannot Replace
I have seen Coldplay and TH too! ahah, Coldplay is wonderful live...maybe better, musically, but TH is better...excitement-wise. it's not like i was falling all over myself to be in the presence of...coldplay singer. lol, see? oh, and i read a great and terrible beauty, and the rest of the series, too :)
Date: 02/03/11 08:09 pm Title: When You Lose Something You Cannot Replace
1. the accident is what i thought it was :)
2. not confusing
3. aw yah, so cute :3 i dont know...i think my favorite line was that he had the coolest room in the world
4. i think bill was completely messed up before the accident, thanks to daddy and the fact that even at school, where daddy isnt, people like tom only made it worse and tried their hardest to make his life horrid. it's so bad that he doesnt eat and thinks no one in the world cares for him...which i guess was sort of true, but really really horrible, especially that he blamed himself instead of realizing it was just because everyone were ignorant fucktards
Date: 02/03/11 03:40 am Title: When You Lose Something You Cannot Replace
im sorry about CB :( i really liked Final Attraction. ahh dad is bad news...but it would be nice to wake up rich one day..:)
Author's Response: I absolutely loved Cinema Bizarre, and I still listen to them all the time. Haha, yes it would be xD
Date: 02/02/11 06:03 pm Title: When You Lose Something You Cannot Replace
Have I ever told you that this is my favorite Fanfic?
I just read it for the thrid time :)
Author's Response: Wow!! That's awesome! I feel really honored. I've been rereading it myself actually, and I'm probably going to edit it once school is finished because there's some spelling/grammar mistakes I'd like to correct. :D
Date: 02/02/11 05:26 pm Title: When You Lose Something You Cannot Replace
something about food doesnt agree with him...tom is a douche. probably caused him to pass out at the wheel or something
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! :D
Date: 02/02/11 05:08 pm Title: When You Lose Something You Cannot Replace
isn't it normal for german students to take two foreign languages? haha, in high school I took French and Japanese and Spanish so it doesn't seem strange to me, though I'm American
Author's Response: For German students its normal to take two foreign languages, but because American students typically only study one, I made that note.
Date: 01/03/11 09:49 pm Title: Confusion Never Stops
Very good job of this story! I support you completley as I used to be in the same position as you. Now I feel full when after eating I feel like there's a heavy weight in my stomach. It'll also expand but it goes down after about 10mins for me. I used to only eat maybe a piece of carrot or a tomato a day till I ended up passing out and being told that I would have only a little while left to live if I kept it up. I hope everything turns out ok for you :)